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03-27-2008, 08:48 AM
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| Junior Member  Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 29 From: seattle | Where'd you get Bimbo bread? The second image is the perfect candidate for Jezterr's HDR machine. The bright sun made the foreground underexpose, and I can't see the Bimbo. I'm really digging the wood grain in the floor and the flaky paint in the first one. |
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03-27-2008, 10:42 AM
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| Moderator  Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 513 From: a cesspit. My Camera: disposable | the second image for sure, because it gives you a better sense of location, and the bread isn't necessarily the focus. but bimbo bread is kinda cool. if you have the raw for it, you can pass it as an hdr, or you can do a shadow/highlight pass on it, if you feel like you need to push the shadows out, but i think it works well as it is. the only thing that bothers me is the one crooked rail and the other blocking the horizon line between the water and the mountains. and maybe the foreground's a little soft. otherwise, nice shot.
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03-27-2008, 02:22 PM
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| Senior Member  Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 107 From: ............... My Camera: Olympus Evolt E500 | While the second shows location better, and perhaps has more interest I like the first if you were actually titling it 'hopelessness'. THe second looks to be (in my mind) a cozy cottage by the beach. Whereas the first says hunger and desperation. Besides the rawness of the wood as Motorzen mentioned.
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03-27-2008, 02:49 PM
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| Senior Member  Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 130 From: Butt Hell | Quote:
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