2 for critique please.

manicmike · 11-14-2009, 10:33 AM

Just curious what you would do to improve these.

JayT · 11-14-2009, 04:19 PM

I'd adjust the white balance.
other than for that, not sure what else I can tell ya. Neither subjects pull me in.

timebom · 11-16-2009, 12:41 PM

top one I would put more color into the rose only, hint more of red or a whole lot of red. I would be playing with it for a while. lol

second one is too monochromatic and flat to me.. maybe more contrast to define textures better? dunno, it just isnt as gripping as the top one.

11-14-2009, 10:33 AM	#1
manicmike Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Ellensburg Posts: 12	2 for critique please. Just curious what you would do to improve these.

11-14-2009, 04:19 PM	#2
JayT Administrator Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Darkness Posts: 741 My Camera: must take pretty pictures	I'd adjust the white balance. other than for that, not sure what else I can tell ya. Neither subjects pull me in. __________________

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11-16-2009, 12:41 PM	#3
timebom Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Central Washington Posts: 23	top one I would put more color into the rose only, hint more of red or a whole lot of red. I would be playing with it for a while. lol second one is too monochromatic and flat to me.. maybe more contrast to define textures better? dunno, it just isnt as gripping as the top one.